Week 8 pin up and changes

our week 8 pin up: 

We have been told that our original idea was a bit too movie like and not well fleshed out enough. 

we were told to go back to the basics and were shown some cool new artist models to think about 

this was one of the first images we found in week 7. we are still interested in this and want to use it as our base image but we got really inspired by these artist models: 

we were also told that we need to make our ideas more architectural, using straight lines to create curves.